Anna Graham

Hey there, Dreamworx! It's so weird, I'm pretty sure I commented on this one. It must not have worked. Weird. Anywho, I loved this chapter! Am I right in supposing ...

You lead me through the hollow, pointing out the pine needles that snap beneath your shoes; the warm sunlight of the afternoon, and the whisper of a red-tailed hawk in ...

*Applause* I loved this chapter! You're great at creative dialogue, and you manage to keep it realistic, too! Vick is my hero! He's got so much character; you are a ...

Hey there, KJ! Sorry it's been a while! I was so excited when I found out you added a chapter! I love this story! The others caught some little things ...

So, i'm not sure how to delete this. I'll just leave it up for now, because it's late and my mind is mush. :D --Anna

A few of you have asked about the hyphens. I appologize profusely. See, for some strange reason, the computer sticks them in there randomly after I paste it in from ...

Hey again! I really enjoyed this chapter! The confusion, the hangover, the vengeful mob leader--i can't wait to read the next one! I really like Dewey too. He's not exactly ...

Hey there, Dreamworx! First of all, it's amazing how much this story has progressed from the very first chapter! Already it's sounding more natural, and your descriptions are beautiful. The ...

Thanks bunches, KJ! :D --Anna

So pretty much I'm uber excited! I searched all over your piece, taking it apart for something I could review on. Here's a maybe: Vick’s fingers moved deftly and surprisingly ...

Ok, if you remember, Napodi, Will, and the twins just escaped from the massacre. They're hiding in a secret cave built into the wall, and waiting for it to be ...

Hey, KJ! This is so intense, I'm shaking. I'm not even kidding you. You're doing extremely well describing her uncertainy, and his fondness for Becca. Your words flow so well, ...

Let's pretend for a second that I'm an all powerful genie/santa claus. If I could somehow give you anything you wanted in the world, what would it be? Anything. --Anna

I think it just depends on the reader, really. If they're expecting a steak dinner with garlic mashed potatoes and drink of choice, (Like something by Charles Dickens) they're going ...

I'm just going to jump right in, because I'm excited! “Thanks , ” replied Tom, handing the air rifle to his friend. A comma instead of a period here, since ...